Thursday, August 06, 2009

Mere Scribbling

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I say........ 'I exist not'
They say I do…
“We have proofs of it”,
they add.
To my fear,
‘Do they actually have you???’

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8 comments:

M VERMA said...
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M VERMA said...

Oh! Vartika Jee
What you said in just few lines!
Why do you fear --
Ask them to give proof and keep your 'you' with you for always.
I hope : It is the only solution for you fear.
Am I right?

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

these few line are not only lines they are amazing work of words.. bahut badhai itni kam shabdo me itni gahri baat kahne kew liye ....


aabhar

vijay

pls read my new poem "झील" on my poem blog " http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com

poemsnpuja said...

thought provoking...layers of meanings...questions...and so much in just few lines...now that what i call amazing!

thanks for the comment on my post today...bahut pyara likha aapne. kuch comments ko wakai kagaj pe sahejne ka man karta hai...thanks a ton

nidhi said...

An epitome of your skills...

गौरव said...

मेरा यकीं करिए मैंने आज तक सिर्फ़ दो पंक्तियों में इतनी बड़ी कविता कभी नही पढी...........

संजय भास्कर said...

bahut hi sunder



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Gaurav Sharma said...

Bang!! Awesome write ....n 'zabardast' Hit.!!

--Gaurav